tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28239716.post115757564712892920..comments2023-06-05T08:06:09.887-04:00Comments on The Starr Review: A Good StartRaven Starrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09806191416867911834noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28239716.post-1157669445509316252006-09-07T18:50:00.000-04:002006-09-07T18:50:00.000-04:00Good luck!! Its exciting isn't it? Which story is ...Good luck!! Its exciting isn't it? Which story is this for? If you join Romance Divas message board you can request a critique partner there. Thats what I did for GLWL.Kelley Nyraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00370986712526819194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28239716.post-1157628302042890372006-09-07T07:25:00.000-04:002006-09-07T07:25:00.000-04:00Thank you both so much. I have tweaked it and sen...Thank you both so much. I have tweaked it and sent it back out.<BR/>I am crossing my fingers and I hope that this will be the one if not then Iat least I know that someone is interested.<BR/>What is passive voice? anyone anyone?Raven Starrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09806191416867911834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28239716.post-1157609579132559622006-09-07T02:12:00.000-04:002006-09-07T02:12:00.000-04:00Wow! That is awesome news. It's a great first step...Wow! That is awesome news. It's a great first step. <BR/> I hope you decide to tweak it and send it back out.<BR/><BR/>Good luck!RomanceWriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14920489469191764147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28239716.post-1157599053748456662006-09-06T23:17:00.000-04:002006-09-06T23:17:00.000-04:00Wonderful, Raven! Looks like the editor in questi...Wonderful, Raven! Looks like the editor in question, is going to be soundly impressed. <BR/>Congratulatons! And I'll keep my fingers crossed that it's accepted the 2nd time round.<BR/>loveSuzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.ukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08818807164881810296noreply@blogger.com